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Set me boundaries if you wish,
but it won't do a thing.
My imagination is always going far,
past almost everything.
Borders, they won't hold me
back from what I think.
I have to many ideas in my head
and I'll have to spill my ink.
I might mess up the first few tries
of saying what I know.
But practice always make prefect,
and I think that's going to show.
I want to go past my borders,
beyond an empty sheet.
I want to cover it with writing
that makes you want to think.
So give me boundaries if you wish,
but of them I will break out.
I have too many ideas to hold back,
and with them I'm going to go all-out.
Man, where did this come from? I think the word boundaries and a poem comes out of it?
. . . Anyway, I'll probably change the title later, because that was the only good one I could think of. Enjoy.
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rioza Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Very nice! :) Your purpose and message really shine through here. Everything is easy to understand, so I'm not preoccupied with trying to decifer any meanings, which is a great relief to me to be honest. X3 This way, I can focus on the other wonderful aspects of your poem. Like your rhyming, which I love, and your message which I love even more. :3 I wholeheartedly agree with you here. Great work! :clap:
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NVZgirl Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012   General Artist
:blush: Thank you very much! And thank you for the favorite!
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rioza Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Of course! :)
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